comparison between two poems:
Racism:
In this essay two poems will be compared which are about racism in our society. The poems are written by two different authors one is called Robert M Hensel and the other one is called Pranav Dhakal. I will look carefully on different aspects in the poems such as stylistic features, language and point of view from the author and what his view is on racism. I will give my thoughts on which poem is better.
The poem from Robert m Hensel which is called End racism uses a lot of different stylistic features as metaphors and personification where the other poem from Pranav Dhakal which is called colour racism used almost no stylistic features in his poem which made less lively. He also more simplistic language than Robert M Hensel which makes way more easy to understand which message the author wants to get across.
The Authors both want inform people about racism and that it has to stop. They both want to tell that your personality and your brain is way more important than the colour of your skin. The real difference between the two poems about racism is that one who is called colour racism goes more in depth in what people feel when they feel when they are judged on their skin colour. The poem end racism talks more about that we all have to unite and all live together and that we do not look at anyone his skin colour.
In my opinion both poems have a really clear meaning and I think it are both really good poems with a good message. They both used multiple of stylistic features where the one end racism used a lot more whereas the one end racism is way shorter . The skin colour goes more in depth about racism which made that you know what the people who come across racism felt. I also saw that the poem skin colour did not use a lot stylistic features, but they used more complex words. Also there are way more stylstic features which make the meaning stronger, that we have to stop racism.
To compare, the two poems both were really good, but I think the poem end racism used a lot of stylistic features which made the poem way more lively than the poem skin colour. They also used less sophisticated language what made way easier to read and the author was clearer in his point of view which I find really important in this kind of poem, which talks about such a important issue.
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