re-write task chapter 1 and 2:
Chapter 1: the villain
On an evening a sixteen year old girl called Zara goes out and ask a men to sleep with her for money. He replies quite irritated and he reacts ‘’why are you so young’’ and Zara reacts I just need money. He calls her a prostitute and more men came around and attacked her, because they said that prostitution was an offence. They man said ‘’we are going to kill you’’, you could see on her face that she felt frightened. Than mysterious man came around called Macbeth and came up to man. The men who kidnappers were confused, they did not know what Macbeth wanted from them. Than he took Zara with him and you could see that Zara was confused. She did not what was happening. Macbeth then sprayed Tear gas over the 5 men who were kidnapping Zara. Three of the five did not survive the tear gas attack and so two survived. They really wanted to find Macbeth, because they were really angry due to the fact that they killed three of their friends. She still could not believe that Macbeth saved her from the creepy looking men. Macbeth sees himself as the king the saver of twentieth century. Macbeth set the house of parliaments in fire, because he just wanted to do that. This is not the only strange thing he did that evening he suddenly alights the sky with fireworks, he put houses and broke a lot of windows in the city. First Zara felt really afraid that the police would kill Macbeth and after that the fireworks alighted the sky she felt excited. That he was a moment when she did not feel any anxiety. The morning after the night that Macbeth exploded the house parliament and killed the people who wanted to kill the sixteen year old Zara. The two who were attacked wanted to find him. There was a three minute recording of him, however there off course could not be recognized who he was. Everything who knew something about the explosion of the parliament had to come in contact with Mr, Almond. The launching of the fireworks was some evidence found on which equipment was used. The boss of the investigating linked he attack on the house of parliament and the death of three finger men and almost exactly knew that there was one person who had something with both of the accidents that night. One of the Finger men was really angry with Mr almond and that he didn’t do enough to catch the terrorist in his opinion. Mr Almond was really afraid and you could see him sweating. One of the Finger Men said ‘’ If you don’t find him you will be mine. Mr Dascombe the boss of the country was going to do an announcement on most important radio channel in the country. Normally he would not something like that, but now it was a really special occasion and the population needs to be informed.
Chapter 2: The Voice
The boss broadcasted on the radio, but of course for that was going to broadcast there should be thought of a really good story on the radio. The two were messing around and joking what Mr Almond is going to broadcast on the radio. They were having a different what was going to be set, because Mr Almond wants to declare that everything is safe when the men who worked for the radio wanted the exact opposite. After the night Zara got taken, blindfolded my Macbeth to his house which was a really big art gallery with beautiful paintings inside. You could see that Zara felt astonished and surprised that Macbeth lived in a such a big art gallery. The most interesting of all was that he built this all himself. She liked every particular thing about it. Zara was really scared of the music that was played in the art gallery which was situated in the city of London. That exact same day one of the Finger men was sitting in the train and the other finger men wanted to get in the exact same coupe. He refused to let him in the train, you can clearly see that he is really irritated about everything what happened. He was sitting in the train, but did not like that there were more people talking about nonsense in his opinion and you saw on his face that he wanted to harm them. The finger man was sitting and saw someone appearing in a black cape and around ten seconds later the lights when out of the train. All the men in the coupe were really afraid. They got their pistols out of the pockets, because they were going to get attacked. There was one man who thought there was nothing then said ‘’ it is just a naught yarn there is no one’’. After a couple seconds Macbeth attacked the men and they were wounded. A couple of minutes later they passed away in the coupe. One the men who was attacked was questioned by the police what happened during the accident. The men of course did not have a good description , because he was wearing a mask, so you could not clearly see his face and only the mask. He explained that he passed away for an hour and shortly explained what happened. The police men said ‘’ I think there is a link between all the devastating event happening in our city. They police, also had some evidence, but they went have more evidence to be able to catch Macbeth.
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